Extremely powerful.
Both the story and you're writing.

I thought that your description of Jared's breakdown after the realized what he'd done was amazing.

The point of view from the stalker was good too. Gave us insight on how he thought he was right.

The ending was very brave of you. Esp for fanfic. I've noticed we all are drawn to happy endings even when we have to betray the characters and force them into behaviors that did not hold true to the rest of the story.

I really feel a lot of pain for Jensen. He was so innocent to what was happening. Even to the end when he tried to talk Jared down, he was being the nice guy. Also the miss my momma part kind a killed me a little.

Also you provided us with the reason on why we lock our Facebook privacy settings down!!!