Im not much of a dark!fic fan but I like the summery and thought to give it a try.
I dont regret it thats for sure, there was something about Jared that made me believe his character, it wasnt simply a dark fic for the sake of darkness, this was a real psychological thriller. I thought I'd hate Carrie but I loved and I thought I'd hate this but I loved it.
Kudos to you for a job well done.