http://rhai-na.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rhai-na.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rose_the_hat 2014-07-28 09:21 am (UTC)

Wow... Usually dark!fics and deathfics are not my cup of tea, but I certainly don't regret reading this!
It's so powerful and phsycological and tragic... and touching in a way.
I like your writing, and I think you've done an amazing job to show the different aspects of the situation from the single point of weiw.

I don't even know which one of the boys is more miserable here - besause sure, Jensen an innosent victim in both physically and psychically ways and he's been being anything but nice to the end.
But seeing emotionally unstable Jared, his inner turmoil, hearing his history and witnessing his breakdown... It kills me too(

I feel sorry for both Jensen and Jared and that's why to tell the truth for me your choice of the such ending for this exact setting is a right one.

Thank you for your hard work, it's really great!
(sorry for my bad English)

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